This has a lot of potential. It is a bit repetitive, and some parts feel a bit empty, like the solo piano parts feel a bit airy and light, with nothing to really ground them. Even just a bit of bass notes would improve this a lot. Great job though!
This has a lot of potential. It is a bit repetitive, and some parts feel a bit empty, like the solo piano parts feel a bit airy and light, with nothing to really ground them. Even just a bit of bass notes would improve this a lot. Great job though!
There is definitely something here. For starters, the main melody could very much be improved. The off key notes really throw it off, but it definitely could work if it was a bit more put together.
thanks for the advice! i changed the second part of the song so i suggest you check it out
This isn't the worst thing I've heard. It has some good parts, and the drums are great, but sometimes the melody isn't on the same key as other parts of the song, which is throwing it off. Other than that, pretty okay!
Thanks,i was quite bored when making it like i had absolutely no idea what to do,thanks for the review though,appreciate that
Not bad!
Thanks bro, your amazing
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